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All Deviations


So much blood from a tiny little hole
A gun shot's deceleration of a life you stole

The piercing scream echoing through the sound
I clench my lips and smirk
Wake up, your hands are bound

A shrill scream that pierces my mind
Disastrous actions and woeful memoirs you're bound to find

This is a life I've let you contort
A selfish act upon your part to control

BANG

It all fades away while my eyes seal shut
So much blood from such a tiny little hole
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A homage to The Downward Spiral.
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~xxEvxx:iconxxEvxx: Apr 24, 2008, 8:41:11 PM
it's interesting

like the repetition of the first and last lines alot

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and all I ask is that you leave me my imagination where I can fly so far away
-Stephanie J Block
Never Neverland (Fly Away)
~Disasterpiece666:iconDisasterpiece666: May 1, 2008, 11:06:09 PM
Thank you. It's definitely a different set of tracks from what I'm used to writing on.

Thank you for commenting! It means a lot. :)

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"I've strangely become immune to the thought of seeing you."